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Master Saruwatari's OC Zephi

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a fullbody commission for :iconmastersaruwatari: of his OC Zephi
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

nice, character design. i always enjoy your style and you have a lot of potential to your art. As far as critiques goes I would say what I noticed first that you could apply better is your coloring techniques. I don't know what program you use, but it seems to me you use too much of the burn tool and you could try some other brushes to lend different textures to your coloring. And also try simplifying your coloring more as well. You're style is already cartoony and flat already so I think a more simple color scheme would help make your characters my dynamic. and lastly you have a lot of points of shine in your character's hair and like i said earlier, simplifying things like leaving one shine to her hair i think would look better and won't over complicate it. but awesome work, you stay on the grind and pump out a LOT of drawings dude. i can tell you're motivated and like i said i think you got a cool style your developing so keep up the good work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>