Abigale (aka Little Red)

let me start by saying i was looking through you earlier stuff only to find that you have an impressive learning curve, both with cpu and analog drawing technique, and the stuff you were doing early last year is a world away from what your doing now,moving on,im this particular you've shown a bit of improvement in you sense of proportion as well as your ability to convey the characters demeanor (bringing the character to life) /which is never a real issue for you but the improvement is visible/.issues that i spot would be with the anatomy in some places namely the hips and legs to some extent,though one can chock the issue up to style, it does in some way throw off the drawing a a little, if your not already using a base body structure when drawing figures then i would suggest it,(i lean heavily on this especially when drawing females)also, your shading has undergone a huge improvement in a short period of time ,the only issue with it in this is that the areas of shading contradict each other ,theres no discernible light source , this is hard for me to explain in writing <nevermind the fact that it sounds so harsh/sorry/> but when shading its usually best to have the shaded areas in one side of the figure (opposite of the light source) and the lighter areas on the other (closer to the light source) the shines in the eyes are usually a good way to tell where the light source is as well.even with the minor errors that i spotted,the style of the character as a whole is great! you have a good sense of style,and a nack for designing memorable characters, neither have failed you here,the background fits the serious feeling that she gives off, and the idea of a demon hunter on roller skates makes me smile,(imagine the badass fight scenes that could produce) so yeah ,nice job here keep doing what you've been doing and the improvements will never end, hope this was helpful -Wes Out